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12-14-2006, 11:22 AM | #16 |
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Re: Poems!!!!!
8/10 very nice, your mind is spreading its boundaries, and you can see this.
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12-14-2006, 08:41 PM | #17 |
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It's happening soon
Once you and me will sit down Our beliefs descend. Thinking and drinking Only time will tell the tale That we're not alone. That old memory It is lying on the ground But where have WE gone? Like a museum Men look back to ancient things For they are worthy. We won't fade away. For this old recollection, It will last the ages. |
12-14-2006, 10:01 PM | #18 |
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7/10, very nice.
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12-14-2006, 11:35 PM | #19 |
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Thank you, Bubba!! -giggles- I think that's the first time I've called you that.
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12-15-2006, 01:51 AM | #20 |
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Dreams Of You
I'm always dreaming of you, because your all I think about, but latley, my dreams have turned into nightmares, there's darkness all around me, and the only lightis from my heart. I call out your name, but you don't come, because your not around to help, so all I can do is give into the darkness, because I cannot fight this battle alone. But, what if it's not all just a dream, what if it actually comes true. Will you come if I call? I just pray for that day to never come, and, that I never have to fight alone. I wrote this along time ago....wow! |
12-17-2006, 07:40 PM | #21 | |
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Fave poems: #1, #3 and #6. Keep on, maybe when you get older you might write a book with poems!
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12-17-2006, 08:53 PM | #22 | |
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Um...poetry? I get deep into my poems. Kennings, metaphors, imagery,
and allusions. How I love to write. VIII Embodied anger, waiting for release, Stress compounded, the river Styx's new beast. Promises broken. Hatred abound. Nothing to calm me, nothing I've found. Two hearts apart. An unfulfilled wish. All three courses. Wrath the main dish. Pondering sorrow. Unfathomable pain. Internally clouded. Shattered vitality under rain. All vision is blurred. None understand. One knows. One takes command. Like an eagle, she's here to my rescue. Shrouded life, now into view. Like the almighty Father, she comes and it's fixed. No longer am I, caught betwixt. To seal it all, given something divine. Her hand for life. She wants to be mine. Humbled knight's position. A dirtied knee. 2015, I'll give my plea. Oh! 2015! Eight years stand. Next to the left, two settings about a band. Praying to that day, she'll be without "S". Praying to that day, she'll see me as the best. So much faith in my veins, it flows like the red and white. Hope singing Hercules, concentrated might. Atop my shoulders. In the back it'll be. Dear Lord, I pray that she waits for me.
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12-18-2006, 08:43 AM | #23 | |
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12-18-2006, 11:40 AM | #24 |
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In the twist of her arms I feel love, warmth, and compassion. In the twist of her arms I can hear the heart beating of a woman whom has suffered a great misery In the twist of her arms I can sense the soul of a mother who longs for her child In the twist of her arms I feel the tough,but soft skin of a valkyrie In the twist of her arms we watch the sun set In the twist of her arms she breathes gently down my neck In the twist of her arms we ponder when our journey will end In the twist of her arms I can finally rest ~The Wolf
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01-13-2007, 01:11 AM | #25 |
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.:Love Is Perfect:.
Love is kind And love is sweet. Love is two people And that's all you need. Love is undefined But I still know what it is. Love is special And that's all you need to know. Love is amazing When you're with the right person. Love is everything Everything you need to know. Love is life And if you don't love, What's the point in living? Love is all I need. Just the one I love By my side forever more. Love is just us That's all we need. Sometimes it's simple And sometimes it's not. Either way Love is... Perfect. ~~ Miyu
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01-13-2007, 01:14 AM | #26 |
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Re: Poems!!!!!
thats the poem she wrote/gave to me!
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01-13-2007, 01:17 AM | #27 |
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Yep yep!
That's it!!!
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01-13-2007, 08:22 AM | #28 |
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Hum... I wrote other poem in English...
Nothing special ---------------- Foreign Inspiration Thinking about writing A poem, a Word, something Can’t focus, void cleanses us But it is not much of a problem I’m not writing because I must My will is the most lyrical Words to paper, dust to dust The impulse after the long fall But as one word shines upon the others My mind keeps falling, verse to verse, not metres Mind and heart, rhyming together I’m not falling, I’m floating! I’m the words in the paper, my vice Poetry’s a toy in the circle of life. |
01-17-2007, 05:02 PM | #29 |
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I dont beleive in this world nothing happens here its boring and I have no control of my own destiny im pulled to and fro by the tides of lofe thats why I live in another world I only walk through this one like a phantom, in the other world is where I truely abide.
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01-17-2007, 05:05 PM | #30 |
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Lol, poetry. =P
I ALWAYS wrote poetry in my teen days. XD I'm a little cold Watching events unfold Haha, the story of you Writing it isn't much to lose Focus on the simple things Like the chill the wind brings Or watch the way the wind blows And how red it makes your nose Because you won't get a second chance Again, to stand there, in that exact stance You know you can't do that again So this is the time your life begins Take every second of it you can Use all the time you have to plan It may be the last time you can plan it Shape your life as you see fit You only get to live one time And death is only the first sign Of what is coming in the after life So, stop trying to be nice You know as well as I do What amount of pressure that's on you Look outside of the box And release your inner locks. AABB style, if anyone knows how to dig into poetry rules. =P
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